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elliptical: when the reader is obliged mentally to supply the words omitted in a cadence, the result is always unsatisfactory, both as to sound and sense.

But we should steadfastly bear in mind that harmony in composition must never appear the effect of labour, and that the gravest offence against the art of writing is to allow the musical tone of a cadence to interfere with the sense or strength of the expression.

PROPORTION.

The principle of proportion, on which some remarks were made under the head of Unity in Sentences,' is indispensable to harmony. It consists in the arrangement of the parts of a composition in such a way that they exhibit a just relation to the whole piece of writing. There is something disagreeable to our nature in seeing the parts of any object out of proportion. A sense of beauty is always conveyed by the contemplation of an object whose parts are in a proper relation to the whole thing and to each other. We may not be always sensible of the cause of these feelings; but the truth is, that our pleasure or pain in beholding any thing is produced, in a great measure, by the proportion or the disproportion of its parts. Now, of this principle we must not only be cognisant, we must put it into practice in writing. Therefore, in constructing sentences, we should be careful not to make a very wide difference in the length of their members. All the clauses should approach each other in length. A long introduction, followed by a proposition expressed in but few words, would be criticised as written in very bad taste; and a like unfavourable opinion would probably

be passed on one in which a leading proposition begins, and all the rest of the sentence consists of an accumulation of circumstances. In either of these cases, the

sentence would be out of proportion.

The same principle is applicable to consecutive sentences. A very long sentence, followed by a very short one, would be open to objection on similar grounds. The sentences cannot, of course, be all equally long; this, for many reasons, is not desirable; but the rhythm of the periods should be varied, and the clauses should be pretty nearly, though not quite, of the same length.

We should never commence a piece of writing with a very long sentence, as this will often have a discouraging effect on the reader. It is better to begin by stating the case closely and concisely, in a few short sentences; and in the after-part of the composition a greater variety in their length may be introduced.

Lastly, this principle of proportion should be observed throughout a whole composition, whatever may be its form. A long introduction, followed by a very short treatment of the subject itself, will be as disagreeable as a piece of writing to which either the introduction or the conclusion is wanting.

The attentive reader must have perceived that all the rules here laid down are rather cautions against the commission of faults than instructions how to proceed in composition. These remarks, it is hoped, may guard the young writer against errors into which he is likely to fall; but he must not expect that they will of themselves produce excellence or beauty of style. Nothing but continual and careful practice will ensure

his proficiency in this study. Let him write, but continually and carefully; for careless or inattentive writing, instead of improving him, will, no doubt, have a directly contrary effect. And he should not only write; it is recommended that he occasionally select an extract from some eminent author, for the purpose of criticism. The heads under which the general subjects of construction and style have been here treated, will suggest points for his consideration; and thus, by studying the best writers for the sake of their style, as well as their matter, he will insensibly improve both his taste and judgment; he will become a better critic of general literature, and at the same time ensure improvement in his own compositions.

EXAMINATION QUESTIONS ON PART VI.

1. What is a sentence?

2. How are sentences here classified?

3. What is a simple sentence?

4. Write a simple sentence.

5. Show how there may be degrees of simplicity in sentences.

6. What is the usual order of a simple sentence?

7. In what cases is this order inverted ?-Give examples.

8. What is meant by the figure' Asyndeton'?

9. What is its effect?

10. What is the figure 'Polysyndeton,' and in what cases is it applicable?

11. What is a complex sentence?

12. What division is made of complex sentences?

13. What is a period ?

14. What is the proper test of a period?

15. What is a loose sentence?

16. What general difference of character is found between the period and the loose sentence?

17. In what cases are the period and the loose sentence respectively applicable?

18. What qualities are essential to a perfect sentence? 19. What is meant by unity in sentences?

20. How may a sentence be deficient in unity?

21. What effect on sentences have long or frequent parentheses?

22. In what other ways may the unity of a sentence be interfered with?

23. What is meant by strength in sentences?

24. What effect has the immoderate or injudicious use of adjec

tives on sentences?

25. What parts of speech present the greatest difficulty, as to strength, in the construction of sentences?

26. In what part of a sentence should the most important words be placed?

27. What may be said of a sentence in this respect?

28. Which has generally more strength, a period or a loose

sentence?

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29. What is meant by Antithesis'?

30. On what grounds may the use of this figure be recom

mended?

31. In what cases is it especially effective?

32. Into what errors may we fall in applying this figure?

33. What is meant by harmony in sentences?

34. Give the original meaning of the word 'Harmony.' 35. What character does the English language bear with respect to harmony?

36. What division may be made of this subject?

37. Which are the softer, and which the harder final consonants in English?

38. What differences may be found in the sounds of the same Vowel?

39. What may be said of the liquid letters, in respect of har

mony?

40. What effect on harmony has the place of the accent?

41. Why are monosyllables to be avoided at the close of a

period?

42. What may be said with respect to rhyming clauses and alliteration?

43. What forms of words are recommended for agreeable

cadences?

44. What is meant by harmony of proportion?

45. How does this principle apply to language?

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